What do you think of my first posted poem?

I like the way you have personified all the moods of the ocean. I also live on the water and I can relate to your observations. I hope you will write more! please join us ata href="http://www.poetsofmars.com/." rel="nofollow"http://www.poetsofmars.com/./a There are some really good poems there, and good teachers as well!